I think overall, this is a very effective piece, particularly with the use of bright, bold, contrasting colours which in a way represent the character. The eyes stand out to me the most; I like the way you have used thick black to outline the eyes so they stand out, it's very empowering.
There is a good use of shading showing depth, however I think you may have used a little too much white on the right eye as it looks a little blurred. Remember to keep the detail in whilst highlighting parts.
The shoulder looks a little bit manly to me, even for a Na'vi, and maybe in parts the detail is a little too emphasized like in the hair or the streaks on the face, but in the time frame you did it in, I think it's a really fun piece that captures the mood and feel of the film, whilst also being unique and original. Well done.
this is a very impressive work. I love the atmosphere you built up with die colors and the lights. those mainly cold colors give an awesome impression, especially the contrast to the yellow of the ice and the few pink/violet elements in the background
her eyes and her expression are just awesome. You really managed to put intensity into her look that combined with the color/light atmosphere really cause a great impact and I love these dots on her face - looks sparkling
that's why I give you 5 starts for vision and for impact. Originality only got 3,5 stars because the theme and the atmosphere itself kinda reminds me of the trailers of that movie (still haven't seen it) and 'only' four stars for technic because of the lack of details -> as mentioned earlier, the face is just awesome, but these light blue stripes on her body don't look as elaborated as the ones in her face. And the background looks rather simple as well - despite causing such a strong impact -and I'm impressed how you mangaged to create this effect with those minimalistic means
and if I take into consideration that this is a 2 hour speed painting ... I'm just - shocked. I give you an honest "WOW"^^
overall I really love this pic. You did an awesome job once again. (That's why I had to write you a critique - my first one ever - hope it's a tiny bit helpful)
There is a good use of shading showing depth, however I think you may have used a little too much white on the right eye as it looks a little blurred. Remember to keep the detail in whilst highlighting parts.
The shoulder looks a little bit manly to me, even for a Na'vi, and maybe in parts the detail is a little too emphasized like in the hair or the streaks on the face, but in the time frame you did it in, I think it's a really fun piece that captures the mood and feel of the film, whilst also being unique and original. Well done.
her eyes and her expression are just awesome. You really managed to put intensity into her look
that combined with the color/light atmosphere really cause a great impact
and I love these dots on her face - looks sparkling
that's why I give you 5 starts for vision and for impact.
Originality only got 3,5 stars because the theme and the atmosphere itself kinda reminds me of the trailers of that movie (still haven't seen it)
and 'only' four stars for technic because of the lack of details -> as mentioned earlier, the face is just awesome, but these light blue stripes on her body don't look as elaborated as the ones in her face. And the background looks rather simple as well - despite causing such a strong impact -and I'm impressed how you mangaged to create this effect with those minimalistic means
and if I take into consideration that this is a 2 hour speed painting ... I'm just - shocked. I give you an honest "WOW"^^
overall I really love this pic. You did an awesome job once again. (That's why I had to write you a critique - my first one ever - hope it's a tiny bit helpful)
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